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Crew

Elizabeth Choi
December 3, 2020 One Min Read
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Crisp fall evenings

And blinding spring afternoons.

The boat cuts across the calm water,

Disrupting it.

We drop our oars in, straighten our legs, and raise our blades.

Again and again and again.

When the rowers are unified,

Each depending on the other,

Each pulling for the other,

We achieve beautiful motion:

Catch, drive, finish, catch drive, finish.

Legs, bodies, arms, arms, bodies, legs.

We are exhausted and spent

And any other synonym you can think of.

But still we search our deep wells of energy 

For even the slightest of remaining strength

To give more to the boat

Especially when those around you have nothing left to give.

It is peaceful,

And an exhilarating adrenaline rush,

And full of pain at the same time.

In these moments,

The boat is the only thing that matters

And everything else fades away.

Nine girls become one

As sixteen legs pull together

And eighteen eyes look straight ahead.

Lowering splits 

Moving faster and faster

And faster.

I sit in the stern with my headset

Clutching my CoxBox.

Though I am cramped in my seat 

And my voice is hoarse from yelling,

When the wind blows back my hair,

You can see my smile.

Elizabeth Choi

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